I was unable to upload my video to YouTube, so I attached it on this post.
I think I have improved in my explanation and background of the service. I was not very elaborate in the details of the service in my previous pitch. I think it was also important that I refuted possible rebuttals to my service.
You did a good job at keeping eye contact and enunciating your words. Your explanation kept me engage and I agree this pitch was a lot more elaborate. Good job with your improvement.
You did a good job at keeping eye contact and enunciating your words. Your explanation kept me engage and I agree this pitch was a lot more elaborate. Good job with your improvement.
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